1. Add some Chipmunks.
2. Change the baby's name from Renesthme to Dawn. (See what I did there? Both literal AND figurative.)
3. Consider the long term implications of communicating to an entire generation of young girls the legit-sickness of "romanticizing an intimate relationship that leaves [emotional and physical] bruises and scars."
4. Add the subtitle "Yoot Scoot and Boogie" (because "This Place About To Blow" was already taken. Oops... I did it again.)
5. Include the gratuitous use of lasers.*
*I like Lasers
